“Mok” concludes this series set on Callisto. Previous related stories are: And To All A Good Night; Callisto Confidential; Who’s Out There?; and Dating on Callisto.
“Mok?” Carly asked.
“Mok is an accelerant produced by the adult svitan,” Dakkar said. “It enables them to survive in Callisto’s ocean and to capture prey. The ‘krill’ you caught in the command center’s water filters are the juvenile, free-swimming form of svitan.” Carly flashed a quizzical smile.
“Let me describe it another way. Think of mok as the ultimate stimulant … or perhaps it’s easier to demonstrate.” He pulled a blistered card from an inside jacket pocket. “These are ten-second doses.” He pointed to one of the clear blisters. Can you spare ten seconds out of your life?”
Carly nodded, thinking her answer was obvious. Dakkar tore two sealed blisters from the card and handed one to Carly. “Keep that safe,” he said. She noted how his eyes followed her hand slipping the sealed blister into the top of her dress.
He pressed an aspirin-like tablet from the second blister and held it up between his thumb and forefinger. “This contains a highly-diluted ten-second dose of mok.” He handed the tablet to Carly, motioned for her to swallow it then lifted his teacup and saucer with his free hand.
After two seconds he said, “Prevent this accident.” He dropped the cup of hot tea.
Carly jumped back and felt suddenly light—the heavy burden of Earth’s unaccustomed gravity had vanished. The dropped cup and saucer stood with tea lapping well above the rim, fixed immobile in space. Everything about her, Dakkar across the table, a bird in flight, the leaves rustling in the wind, stood still and silent. Prevent the accident, she remembered, then slid the saucer under the cup and gathered up all the tea.
Two seconds later Dakkar’s pensive frozen face transformed to a smile. “You just experienced ten seconds in one ten-thousandth of a second.”
“It was like frozen time,” Carly said, checking that everything was moving normally. “Wow. I felt detached from reality. I don’t know if I should be elated or frightened.”
“Both are reasonable responses,” Dakkar said. “Mok could be a boon to doctors or rescue teams in emergencies. Imagine a crisis where everyone had time to walk away—”
“Or a one-person hit squad taking out an army.”
“Exactly,” Dakkar said. “But mok has some serious limitations. It accelerates the user but not the appliance. Physical and chemical reactions outside the body aren’t accelerated, vehicles, bullets, and sound move at the same speed. Even undigested food can’t be processed to keep up with the body’s accelerated demand. That’s how the svitan kill their victims, by hyper-accelerating them until their systems collapse.”
“So I couldn’t overdose and live sixty years in a fraction of a second.”
“It might feel like that, but you’d be in a coma. A pure dose from the svitan’s tentacles would crush your systems instantly.”
“However did you discover mok?”
“The Goorm alerted us and made a business proposition. They also helped us with the Callisto harvesting station. They claim to be the greatest traders in the galaxy. When they detected my team experimenting with the Myseko gate, they made contact. Apparently, interstellar regulations prohibit outsiders from harvesting from systems with sentient beings.” Dakkar smiled. “We must have qualified.”
“What are the Goorm like?” Carly asked, consoling herself that her speculations about space aliens and nineteenth century gentlemen weren’t totally in error … there were aliens, and Dakkar was certainly a gentleman.
“We’ve only met them virtually. The Goorm’s nearest trade base is two hundred light years away. They’re a marine species and look like big crabs. All we’ve talked about is business. They want to expand operations in this system.”
Carly lifted her teacup and carefully guided it back onto the saucer. Her hand shook. “This gravity is wearing me down,” she said with a sigh. “I have enjoyed our time together very much and have so many more questions, but I’m afraid I’ll have to call it an evening. Might we continue this another time?”
“Perhaps next week if you are free?”
Carly chuckled and looked up. “Oh, let me see, I’ll have to check my social calendar.”
They laughed and said their farewells. Dakkar apologized for enjoying her company too much to notice how she was tiring. He and Rachit helped her to the dressing room where she changed to her moon suit in Callisto’s lighter gravity. The cabriolet bench reversed its path and soon returned Carly to the command center where she found her dog simulant Heathcliff waiting with wagging tail.
The next morning she felt as stiff as if she’d chopped down a forest. She swore to redouble her exercise routine and get back on her Cal-Pro meds.
Her report to GSA Hargate was the standard yawn: no problems, maintenance checks normal. She complained about food and boredom because that was what she always did. She made no mention of Roger Dakkar, the Goorm, mok, the Myseko gate, or the Callisto cabriolet. Hargate responded with their standard closure, which Carly suspected was a recording. “We’ll look into the problem. Have a good day, Ms. Shellion.”
Two days later, Carly was completing her tasks and anticipating hearing from Dakkar. Suddenly Heathcliff exploded into a dance of barking jumps. The airlock hissed, the lock released, and three GSA security officers stormed in.
A large man with two silver bars on his shoulder stepped into her face. “Ms. Shellion, I have a report that you’ve consorted with the international criminal Roger Dakkar,” he shouted as if she was in another room. “He also goes by the names Raja Dakkar and Regor Rakkad, and at Ohio State University he was registered as a Nigel Westphal.”
Carly shook her head and kept her voice level. “Captain… ahh Jerk-off,” his nametag read Chertov, “I assure you I’ve not been entertaining international criminals on Callisto. I was hoping to open a casino, but GSA’s been late filling the supply requisition.” She scratched her eyebrow with a closed fist and stole a glance at the officers ransacking the room.
“Don’t get cute, Shellion. We have the evidence,” Chertov said. Carly gave an impatient show-me sigh. “The helmet on your moon suit and that rover,” he pointed to Heathcliff at her feet, “they have sensor transmitters.”
Why you little spy you, Carly thought, noting the glassy glimmer in the simulant’s eyes. Heathcliff never saw Dakkar, and I left my helmet in the dressing room when I went to dinner … so Chertov can’t have much evidence.
“We raided Dakkar’s lab and found these,” Chertov said, reading the display on his palm. “It’s the same conveyance you were riding—”
Carly pulled his hand around to look. It was Dakkar’s cabriolet. “That’s the vehicle the Goorm sent for me,” she said. “But I don’t know how Decker, you say, got the plans.”
“His name’s Dakkar,” Chertov shouted. “And who the hell are the Goorm?”
“The space aliens I met with. The ones who built that,” she pointed to the blueprints, “the ones who built the monitoring station beyond the crater wall.” Carly thought her made-up story sounded better than Chertov’s.
“You met space aliens? Excuse me.” He looked at his palm, held it to his ear, and turned away. “Impossible. No. No. Impossible. Our sensors would have picked up something. So what did you find? Nothing. That’s impossible. Okay, but don’t tell the general until I check the orbiting monitors.”
While Chertov talked, Carly eyed his GSA patch; it was velcroed over another insignia. His boots and moon suit were military issue. He said he didn’t want the general told? GSA didn’t have any generals.
Chertov folded his hand, blew out through his pursed lips, and stared down at the floor.
“They’ve gone haven’t they?” Carly feigned a sigh and a disappointed shrug. Without more evidence her contrived story just might hold up. “It was my fault,” she said. “I should have notified GSA as soon as the Goorm contacted me. But I wanted the credit. We had another meeting scheduled next week.” She kept her voice deadpan. “Now that’s screwed up. The Goorm know our history … were skittish about meeting us … wanted me to be their liaison.” She threw up her hands. “Hell, there it all goes. What’s left at their monitoring station?”
“Nothing. Absolutely nothing. Ice looks like it’s never been disturbed. Isn’t even discolored.” Chertov sat and pressed his forehead into his open hands.
“Want a drink?” Carly asked. He nodded. Then she said, “You guys got here fast. Where’s your unit stationed?” His head snapped up, and his eyes locked with Carly’s. He’d been busted.
“Our Ranger base is orbiting Ganymede. We’ve got too much invested up here to let someone like Dakkar take it.”
“This Dakkar again?” She said and shook her head. “Why would an international criminal come here? What’s in it for him, and where would he get the resources?” Carly asked, as she pulled out a bottle of gin and reached past the cut crystal glasses for plastic cups.
“He’s perfected the Mys—” Chertov stopped then started again. “I just do my job, Ms. Shellion.”
Myseko gate, Carly thought and smiled. She felt a brush on her sleeve and a touch on her hand. Turning it up, she found a folded paper … as if someone too fast to be detected had passed her a note.
She dropped four ice cubes into a plastic cup with four ounces of gin, handed it to Chertov, and excused herself to use the bathroom.
The note was in sepia ink on formal stationary:
I’m sorry we have to postpone our dinner. I will contact you when you get back to Earth. Rest assured Rachit will have the martinis and oysters chilled when you arrive.
5 thoughts on “What is Mok?”
I loved the ten-second Mok scene, and the way the story took on greater intensity when Chertov showed up. I had trouble understanding Chertov’s perspective, that is, how and why he was instantly persuaded by Carly’s lie. I haven’t had breakfast yet, so it’s probably just me. I admired the way Carly kept her head and saved herself – great characterization. The ending – Dakkar on Mok showing up to leave a message – felt wonderfully real, safe and satisfying. Exceptional sf. I hope you begin working on a novel soon.
Thank you. The whole Callisto sequence was fun to write. Because the entire story is told from Carly’s POV, it’s hard to know what Chertov thinks, hopes, and believes. From his reaction, Carly thinks her lie might hold up, but he is not the final arbiter. How bright is he? She manipulated him pretty easily. I plan to follow this up in some future sequence, get Carly back to Earth and back with Dakkar. We can surmise that Chertov hoped he would capture Dakkar and lots of incriminating evidence—something of a coup to boost his career. Now he might be seen as a bungler. Of course, you the reader have a pretty good idea what he was up against. Dakkar’s team of renegades and extra-solar connections will only make him more formidable.
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Sci-fi drug use is almost a tradition (a requirement?) and the Mok demonstration scene is dynamite, pulse-quickening, slick. Love me some Mok. The payback for a single use should be steep, otherwise there’s too much potential for a Universe of superheroes. Or supervillians. Mok doesn’t introduce any completely new possibilities (time stoppage and teleporting and dose-specific intensities) to sci-fi, and it doesn’t have to. I’m sure Mok appears again, satisfying a minor conflict or a peripheral, selfish desire.
The Pan-Galactic Gargle Blaster is simply a really, really powerful alcoholic beverage– the story behind its creation and watching the PGGB in action are what makes it unforgettable. Dick’s Dial-A-Mood machine in “D.A.D. of Electric Sheep”; same thing. What else? Spice Melange is too grandiose, Milk-Plus in “Clockwork Orange” is contrived, Soma in “Brave New World” is dull. Universal drug addiction is rarely a fresh story (Dick’s “Scanner Darkly” is an exception). Sometimes, wildly exaggerated use of today’s vices qualifies as sci-fi drug use: Prostitution in “Total Recall” (Geez, Philip K. Dick just went bonkers with this concept), cigarettes in Luc Besson’s “Lockout” (which should be a bigger deal), the Star Trek Next-Gen episode, “The Game,” where the whole crew becomes addicted to a lame video game that rewards users with space-heroin.
I’ve probably thought about the concept waaaay too much.
Mok is a terrific addition. Love this scene.
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One of the pleasures of writing in this genre is creation … of worlds, of beings, of products and technology. A heady experience, indeed. Yes, I plan to revisit Mok in future stories along with its major purveyors, the Goorm.